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The charts below show the land area lost (thousand km2) per one-meter rise in sea level and the population (in million) affected per one-meter rise in sea level in the predicted future。
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主體分段方法1:一圖一段
開頭段
The charts illustrate the predicted loss of land area and the number of people affected in six regions as a result of a one-metre rise in sea level.
概述段
Overall, Asia is by farthe most severely affected regionin both categories.However, the remaining five regionsdisplay considerable discrepanciesin the relationship between land loss and demographic impacts.
思路要點:
- Asia水土流失面積、受影響人口都最大
- 其他五個區域水土流失面積、受影響的人口規模之間關系呈現不同規律
Body paragraph 1
Regardingland loss, Asiais projected to lose450 thousand km2 of land,followed byAmerica (160 thousand km2) and Europe (150 thousand km2). South Africa and Central Africaexperience relatively smaller losses, at 120 and 80 thousand km2 respectively. Oceania,in contrast,is estimated to experience the least land loss, at only 10 thousand km2.
思路要點:柱圖
- Asia數據最高( 450 thousand km2),America排第二(160 thousand km2) ,Europe排第三(150 thousand km2)
- Africa受影響程度中等,South Africa為120 thousand km2,Central Africa為80 thousand km2
- Oceania損失面積最小(10 thousand km2)
Body paragraph 2
As forpopulation impact, Asiaemerges as the most vulnerable regionagain, where 250 million people will be affected.Despiterelatively limited landloss, South Africa and Central Africarank second and third in terms ofdemographic consequences, with 117 million and 95 million people affected respectively. Americacomes nextwith 73 million people affected,in contrast toits second-place position for land loss.Conversely,despitea moderate level of land loss, merely 10 million people in Europe are predicted to be affected. This figure is five times as large as that in Oceania, whichremains the least affected region
思路要點:餅圖
- Asia數據仍然最大(250 million)
- 盡管損失的土地面積不是很多,但受影響的人口方面South Africa排第二(117 million),South Africa (95 million)
- America有73 million的人會受影響,排名和它損失土地面積的排名接近
- Europe土地損失面積中等,但受影響到的人只有10 million,是Oceania的5倍(Oceania受影響人數最低)
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