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The table shows the two age group participating in the marathon from 2008 to 2012.
主體分段方法1：按照 <年齡組> 分段
主體分段方法2：按照 <時間> 分段(本篇文章采用此種分段方式)
主體1：2008-2009年
主體2：2010-2012年
開頭段
The table illustrates changes in the number of marathon participants in two age groups from 2008 to 2012.
概述段
Overall, participationincreasedin both age groups,resulting ina rise inthe combined total.Among them, people aged 18-39consistently outnumberedtheir older counterparts.In addition, the disparity between the two groups had widened during the period, as the younger cohortexperienced substantially stronger growth.
思路要點：
- 總人數上升，兩個年齡組的人數都上升
- 18-39的人數始終高于40+的人數
- 兩個年齡組的人數差距變大
Body paragraph 1
Initially, 1,200 people aged 18-39 participated in the marathon,notably higher thanthe figure for those aged over 40(800).Together, these figuresamounted to2,000 participants in 2008. By 2009, the combined figurehad risen slightlyto 2,200.This was primarily driven byan increase inthe younger group, whose participationgrew by150, compared witha rise ofjust 50 in the older group.
思路要點：2008年-2009年
- 2008年：18-39人數為1200，40+人數為800，總人數為2000
- 2009年：總人數小幅上升到2200，其中18-39的人上升了150人，但40+的人數只上升了50人
Body paragraph 2
By 2012, the gap between the two groupswidened considerably. Participation among 18–39-year-oldsrose significantlyto 1,750,whereasthe figure for the over-40sincreased much more modestly, reaching1,050.As a result, the difference between the two age groups had grown from 400 in 2008 to 700 in 2012. In addition,these increases brought the total number of participants to2,800 by the end of the period.
思路要點：2010年-2012年
- 兩個年齡組的差距變大
- 18-39的人數到2012年顯著上升到1750，40+人數小幅上升到1050
- 兩個年齡組的差距由2008年的400增加到2012年的700
- 總人數上升到2800
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